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Exercise 1.2 - Web Improvement

Passion Project Website > OLD

Feedback & Suggestions:

Make it responsive and smooth scroll.
Get a title, fix text and text styling
Change font, font color and make picures of movies bigger.
The background color feels depressive > use colors from movie posters for color palette.
Add transitions and make it a fun, lively and movie theater mood.
Have animated background or slideshows or small video clips or gifs from the movie.

NEW VERSION: Animated Films Passion > NEW WEBSITE

Changes & Improvement:

Added a transitions to the header img
Changed the font to a playful fun for the titles and a black background color to showcase the theater vibe
Make the background color of back side of the movie card into colors that relate to the movie poster.
Added a responsive design.

Exercise 1.3 - Print Improvement

Juice Box package design

Feedback & Suggestions:

Change Font
Color combination is weird, red too strong
Logo too big
Logo takes all the focus
Modify Fruits in the background
Font of info to big

NEW VERSION: Juice Box package design

Changes & Improvement:

Change the logo
Make the focus on the fruit flavor
Chose a font to represent breeze
The mixing of the flavor represent Tropical

> Link to individual design

Exercise 1.4 - Video Improvement

The Making: Corndog video Original Version >

Feedback & Suggestions:

Make the video shorter
Cut straight to point some shots
Fix the music to match the video

NEW VERSION: The Making: Corndog video >

Changes & Improvement:

Shorten the video
Changed the music and lower the volume
Added sound effects
Edited the text, font, and transitions of intro